Post By:2006/3/16 15:14:59
[quote]1.情感很美.<br>2.真.<br>3.文筆太浮.<br>4.詩(shī),應(yīng)該有詩(shī)的語(yǔ)境.<br>5.哈,俺是亂說(shuō)的,十二喜.<br>[/quote][em13][em13]多謝指教~
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